A house is wreathed in holiday decorations. The Christmas tree twinkles in the window. A young man trudges up the drive, carrying a large pack. A dog comes around the house and stands barking. Inside, a woman is baking cookies.
1. Who are they? What is going on? Why are they where they are?
2. You choose POV
3. Limit passive verbs
4. You must have a broken item and a green glass vase.
5. You may introduce two more characters