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Happy to see you writing, even if it's just a paragraph.
ReplyDeleteConcise response - it appears to be well edited, to my reading-experienced eyes. The only real problem I have it that it's one scene! I want more. The characters were presented, but whetted my interest for more. The suspense trails were well laid, but I want to follow those to see where the rabbit trails change to red herring or switch by uncovering the more I want to read. How different are the goals of Daykar and the king? How can I tell, unless I get more. Bottom line, your writing has sufficiently aroused my interest. Couldn't have if it was written with broken thoughts, bad grammar, or unbelievable interactions. You've done well.
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